
by Cal Black
A Fantasy, 2022 by Bearberry Studios, 374 Pages
What I Didn’t Like:
- Some repetition. One example is a character who continues to call his daughter “storm cloud” for no reason (other than a nickname). Cute the first time but gets old fast.
- Some of the romance sidelines were not needed, felt forced, and added nothing to the story.
- Audiobook note: some of the voices used for children and women are over-the-top and grate the wrong way.
What I Did Like:
- +Excellent opening chapter. Right away we get elves, dragons, and epic world building all while engrossed in a scene that feels right out of a western. It sets up the entire story well. If you’re on the fence about this one, see if it has a preview or look inside feature and check out that first chapter.
- Banter. This can sell me on a book every time. Characters in this one, specifically Millie and Gil, have amazing banter that carry the story and make the reader laugh out loud.
- Love the levels to the story. This has multiple characters in what initially feels like separate storylines but when it all crashes together, it’s beautiful.
Who Should Read This One:
- Fantasy fans. The dragons, elves, and other fantasy creatures are just commonplace in this world. It’s wonderful!
- Western fans. Of course, take that with a caveat of fantasy being included, but the plot to this one sings as a western.
My Rating: 5 Stars
- When you combine 2 genres like this you take a risk that you’ll get both very wrong. But when it works and both genres can sing in harmony, it’s amazing.


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